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Eevee’s Mark Chapter 1: The Ritual

It is the second full moon of the month. A blue moon. Everyone in a clan of Eevees gathered together around their leader. It was time for the Eevees to evolve during a ritual while the blue moon lasted. The leader, an Umbreon by the name of Dusk, steps around, making eye contact with everyone. Finally, he stops before an Eevee. Dusk: Young Eevee, what is your mark? The Eevee replies nervously. Eevee: F-Flareon, Dusk. Dusk: Then it’s a Flareon you shall become! One peculiar thing about this clan is that the Eevees do not choose their evolution. Their parents mark them, which means their evolution is chosen for them. A terrible fate is said to come to those that become the wrong evolution. Meanwhile, an Eevee has just been introduced to the world. Born to an Espeon, Sol, as her mother. And an Umbreon, Shade, as her father. Sol: Our first child has been born during the blue moon. Shade: Yes! We must surely be blessed! Several nights later, Shade and Sol’s Eevee began walking around the clan for the first time on her own. Eevee: *sniffing* The air… so fresh! (sorry, YouTube messed up my formatting) Shade: Eevee? Eevee: Huh? Shade: Your mother and I have decided a mark for you. Eevee: Mark? Shade: Yes. I can see it in your eyes… You will be marked like me. An Umbreon. You were born during the blue moon. You have the moon in you. We have decided on an Umbreon name for you… Luna. Once you are marked, you will sometimes experience flashes. Don’t worry though. They are only to remind you what your mark is. Shade put his paw to Luna’s forehead, which marked her as an Umbreon. Luna: (Th-that must have been a flash!) A few days later, Sol brought Luna to a lake at the edge of the clan’s territory to watch the sunrise. Sol: Isn’t it beautiful, Luna? Luna: Yes it is. It makes me want to reach out and touch it. Sol: You know, Espeons, like what I am, are associated with the sun. Luna: Well in that case, I think I’m more like an Espeon. Maybe I should be remarked. Sol: Remarked? I’m afraid that’s not possible, Luna. Luna: Well during the next blue moon, I’ll just evolve into Espeon! Sol: What? Luna, don’t you know how dangerous it is to evolve outside of your mark? Luna: It can’t be that bad! Luna: (Another flash! This time, the Umbreon looked somewhat angry…) Sol: If you plan to evolve into the wrong evolution, your flashes will become more frequent! It is said that occasionally you will experience a vision of a hostile Umbreon. This Umbreon appears when the next blue moon comes to finish you off! Luna is thinking too much about her flash, and didn’t hear any of what her mother has said. Sol: Well, looks like we got all that cleared up, and just in time for breakfast! Sol suddenly seems to be thinking about nothing but food and wanders away to look for Shade. Luna: Now that I think about it, I’m kind of hungry too. Luna: Another flash! Luna: Yet another! Luna: What? ???: A… terrible future… ahead of you… Luna: A terrible future…? Next Chapter: Beliefs Revealed

Jean Kelley



  1. Eevee Yuki Posted on April 26, 2011 at 11:42 pm

    how do u get more views than me
    and have less subbers?!?
    this is good!!!

  2. Crowfanity Posted on September 15, 2011 at 12:22 am

    I love it! wish there was a sequal! It reminds me of 2 of my series, one with the eevee evolutions where they form a team that protects Arceus' Jewel of Life from a power-loving sneasle, and a Maplestory series I canceled (cuz it was nothing like I imagined and sucked) where 2 sisters set out to get revenge on their brother who killed their mom when they were little.

  3. Angel Miner Posted on November 24, 2012 at 5:37 am

    Hey! I Saw What You Posted 2 Years Ago On Yahoo Answers And Look At U Now!

  4. Eevee13Girl Posted on November 25, 2012 at 2:01 am

    Haha, thanks. XD I honestly don't know why I posted that anymore and try to forget that I did. X3

  5. Sierra Grater Posted on February 10, 2013 at 3:46 am

    I like it but i couldnt read half of what was there…

  6. carrie brost Posted on April 3, 2013 at 6:25 am

    You should make more of these they aepre so good

  7. Eevee13Girl Posted on April 6, 2013 at 3:14 am

    Thanks! I have a better version of Windows Movie Maker now, and I was planning a possible remake of this series, so it will be higher quality the second time around.

  8. wolflover10326 Posted on April 22, 2013 at 8:52 pm

    My wolf character is named Luna X3

  9. Eevee13Girl Posted on April 22, 2013 at 8:55 pm

    Awesome! Is that a coincidence? 😀

  10. DarkWolf7551 Posted on July 24, 2013 at 4:09 am

    Luna's a rebel.. I like that